- Gives the viewers a good idea of what is going to be shown on the channel.
- Good usage of the ending where the viewers are shown what is going to be coming up next.
- Liked the usage of the shows so the viewer knows what programmes are broadcasted.
- The tree at the ending doesn't line up with the rest of the ident as everything else is food.
- Writing isn't visible on some clips.
Richard-
- Shows the general idea of the channel that the audience is watching.
- Represents a lot of the shows/hints of them.
- Usage of transitions were effective.
- Sort of repetitive.
Elijah-
- Clear representation of the channel.
- Good choice of visuals.
- Good effects.
- Try and use different effects.
Based off of the feedback that I was given, I agree with the points that were given to me and will change parts of my idents accordingly to improve it. At the end of the ident, I show a shot of a tree but it feels out of place as the channel is about Food. I will change this to a shot of food or something being made.
Also, based upon my feedback I will try and add more effects on it to line up with the tinted hue effect I added at the start so it is consistent throughout. I will also fix the text so it is more visible to the viewer.
I disagree with the idea of the ident being repetitive, as it clearly shows the sort of things that are going to happen on the channel such as: cooking shows and just cooking in general.
- Too many jump cuts.
- The logo shows what the channel is.
- Clearly shows the theme of the ident. (Christmas/Winter.)
- The voice over is different compared to others making it unique.
- More repetitive than the Autumn ident.
- Didn't feel as if there were more things signifying that it was Christmas.
- Usage of transitions were good.
- Fix the jump cuts.
- Good theme.
- The first shot should be food. (Christmas Dinner at the start)
- Transitions were good.
I disagree again with the idea of the ident being repetitive, as it clearly shows the sort of things that are going to happen on the channel such as: cooking shows and just cooking in general.
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